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Voice and tone

How the product speaks: the words in every component.

The five answers​

QuestionAnswerWhy
Which kinds of copy does it need?Labels, messages and articlesArticles are the product; the UI copy must match them.
How many tones does it use?One per momentWarm by default, calmer for errors.
How is the voice defined?Principles and examplesEditors work from principles and examples, not word lists.
How does it sound?ConversationalTalk to one reader, like a good editor.
Where do the words matter most?Articles and guidesMost words are in articles and guides.

Tokens​

Each token points to another token. Values live only on primitives, below.

TokenPoints to
content.action.commit
content.action.cancel
content.action.destroy
content.action.retry
content.action.empty-action

When to use what​

SituationUseNotWhy
A button labelA warm verb a reader would say"Submit" or "Click here"Buttons are part of the reading voice. Example: “Subscribe”
The words of an errorCalm and helpful. Take the blame, offer the way forward.Blaming the readerA calm error keeps the reader's trust. Example: “We could not save your email. Check it and try again.”
A success messageWarm and brief, with what happens nextA bare "Done"A warm close invites the reader back. Example: “You're in. The next issue arrives on Friday.”
An empty stateAn invitation, not a dead end"No items"An empty list is a chance to show what the product offers. Example: “Nothing saved yet. Tap Save on any article to read it later.”
A confirmation questionGentle and clear about what changesGuilt or pressureReaders come back when leaving felt respectful. Example: “Unsubscribe from the weekly letter? You can come back any time.”
A first visitOne sentence on what is here and why it is worth readingA sign-up wallOccasional readers decide in seconds whether to stay. Example: “Practical guides, one a week. Start with the most read.”