Voice and tone
Conversational and warm. Talk to one reader, like a good editor would.
Principles
- Write to one person: "you", not "users".
- Short sentences with room to breathe.
- Explain why before asking for anything.
Words
- Use: Read, Save for later, You, Next issue
- Avoid: Click here, Submit, Users, Content
Tone for each moment
| Situation | Use | Not | Why |
|---|---|---|---|
| A button label | A warm verb a reader would say | "Submit" or "Click here" | Buttons are part of the reading voice. Example: “Subscribe” |
| The words of an error | Calm and helpful. Take the blame, offer the way forward. | Blaming the reader | A calm error keeps the reader's trust. Example: “We could not save your email. Check it and try again.” |
| A success message | Warm and brief, with what happens next | A bare "Done" | A warm close invites the reader back. Example: “You're in. The next issue arrives on Friday.” |
| An empty state | An invitation, not a dead end | "No items" | An empty list is a chance to show what the product offers. Example: “Nothing saved yet. Tap Save on any article to read it later.” |
| A confirmation question | Gentle and clear about what changes | Guilt or pressure | Readers come back when leaving felt respectful. Example: “Unsubscribe from the weekly letter? You can come back any time.” |
| A first visit | One sentence on what is here and why it is worth reading | A sign-up wall | Occasional readers decide in seconds whether to stay. Example: “Practical guides, one a week. Start with the most read.” |