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Voice and tone

Conversational and warm. Talk to one reader, like a good editor would.

Principles​

  • Write to one person: "you", not "users".
  • Short sentences with room to breathe.
  • Explain why before asking for anything.

Words​

  • Use: Read, Save for later, You, Next issue
  • Avoid: Click here, Submit, Users, Content

Tone for each moment​

SituationUseNotWhy
A button labelA warm verb a reader would say"Submit" or "Click here"Buttons are part of the reading voice. Example: “Subscribe”
The words of an errorCalm and helpful. Take the blame, offer the way forward.Blaming the readerA calm error keeps the reader's trust. Example: “We could not save your email. Check it and try again.”
A success messageWarm and brief, with what happens nextA bare "Done"A warm close invites the reader back. Example: “You're in. The next issue arrives on Friday.”
An empty stateAn invitation, not a dead end"No items"An empty list is a chance to show what the product offers. Example: “Nothing saved yet. Tap Save on any article to read it later.”
A confirmation questionGentle and clear about what changesGuilt or pressureReaders come back when leaving felt respectful. Example: “Unsubscribe from the weekly letter? You can come back any time.”
A first visitOne sentence on what is here and why it is worth readingA sign-up wallOccasional readers decide in seconds whether to stay. Example: “Practical guides, one a week. Start with the most read.”