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Voice and tone

How the product speaks: the words in every component.

The five answers​

QuestionAnswerWhy
Which kinds of copy does it need?Labels, messages and helpHints and help text carry people through each step.
How many tones does it use?OneOne plain tone everywhere; no surprises.
How is the voice defined?Rules and a word listA word list of common words, with terms to avoid.
How does it sound?Plain and directEvery sentence is easy to read on the first try.
Where do the words matter most?Form steps and errorsWords decide whether a form gets finished.

Tokens​

Each token points to another token. Values live only on primitives, below.

TokenPoints to
content.action.commit
content.action.cancel
content.action.destroy
content.action.retry
content.action.empty-action

When to use what​

SituationUseNotWhy
A button labelA common verb that says what happens next"Submit" or "Proceed"Common words are understood by the most people. Example: “Continue”
The words of an errorSay what is wrong, where, and exactly how to fix it"Invalid input"People must be able to fix the error without help. Example: “Enter your date of birth. For example, 27 3 1980.”
A success messageConfirm what happened and what comes nextA confirmation with no next stepPeople need to know the task is finished and what happens now. Example: “We have your application. We will email you within 5 working days.”
An empty stateExplain what will appear here and how to startA blank pageA blank page leaves people unsure if something failed. Example: “You have no saved applications. Start a new one below.”
A confirmation questionSay what will happen in plain words, and offer a way backA double negativePlain words prevent a choice people did not mean. Example: “Do you want to cancel your application? Your answers will be deleted.”
A first visitSay how many steps there are and how long it takesMarketing copyKnowing the length lowers effort and anxiety. Example: “This takes about 10 minutes. There are 4 steps.”