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Voice and tone

Plain and direct. Every sentence is easy to read on the first try.

Principles​

  • Use common words. Explain any term you must use.
  • One idea per sentence. Put the action first.
  • Never blame the person.

Words​

  • Use: Continue, Change, Start, You
  • Avoid: Invalid, Utilise, Submit, Error code

Tone for each moment​

SituationUseNotWhy
A button labelA common verb that says what happens next"Submit" or "Proceed"Common words are understood by the most people. Example: “Continue”
The words of an errorSay what is wrong, where, and exactly how to fix it"Invalid input"People must be able to fix the error without help. Example: “Enter your date of birth. For example, 27 3 1980.”
A success messageConfirm what happened and what comes nextA confirmation with no next stepPeople need to know the task is finished and what happens now. Example: “We have your application. We will email you within 5 working days.”
An empty stateExplain what will appear here and how to startA blank pageA blank page leaves people unsure if something failed. Example: “You have no saved applications. Start a new one below.”
A confirmation questionSay what will happen in plain words, and offer a way backA double negativePlain words prevent a choice people did not mean. Example: “Do you want to cancel your application? Your answers will be deleted.”
A first visitSay how many steps there are and how long it takesMarketing copyKnowing the length lowers effort and anxiety. Example: “This takes about 10 minutes. There are 4 steps.”